Event #4

It's a writing prompt this time

What to do this time around is to create a hiaku. A Haiku consist of 17 sounds, using three phrases: 5 sounds, 7 sounds, and 5 sounds. You're going to create a haiku to describe your character's greatest fear. Be as creative as you can, because it's not going to end up being your character's fear in the end. What you say and how you say it will help Pure and I determine that fear.


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You don't get to pick your fear, Buggy ;D We get to determine it from the haiku. Would you please edit out the little parentheses part? Looks good, a solid haiku! Good work

So tight, cannot breathe
Too many people packed in
Too small of a space

Putrid scent abides-
The monument fixed prostrate
Mystery surrounds

(I'm no good at haikus, this is the best I could muster. I think I may have squeezed an extra syllable in there sorreh)

You are good, Hinrey.
There are enough syllables;
it is the right length.

Nothing but the birds
The rustling of an empty field
Under hatred of others

Angry shouts resound
They both tear my world apart
I don't know a home.

Darkness all around. (5)
Flashes of lightning sounded. (7)
She cowers under sheets. (5)

(Hope that's good, I've never done this before D:)