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Post by Guest on 26th June 2012, 8:58 pm

Another HP poem. Also about Snape again XD

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The Darling Dead

He choked on burning tears and held her tight.
Though she had long since left, her corpse remained
And it he clasped ‒ his face a stricken white ‒
While hers with all the tears he cried was stained.
Still, knowing he had lead death to her door,
He shook as much in guilt as in his pain.
(Her husband, lying cold upon the floor,
Had sought to block death’s path and sought in vain.)
But through the dusty room resounded cries:
The child yet lived and through him so did she!
And lo! He saw he had his mother’s eyes,
And in that moment glimpsed his destiny:
He’d work until his sins had been appeased
And sorrow-stricken heart by death was eased.
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Post by Tyler on 26th June 2012, 9:05 pm

I like it. I can easily tell it's Snape's POV on finding Lily and seeing that Harry has her eyes. It's awesome. The poem style was really good as well in usage of the content. Overall, very cool dude.
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Post by Guest on 27th June 2012, 8:44 am

Thank you Embarassed
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Post by Guest on 28th June 2012, 7:07 pm

Why are you so good at this XD
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 8:58 am

Abundant sacrifices to the goddess of emo poetry Very Happy
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 9:21 am

Emo is such a depressing word.
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 9:39 am

I think that's the point lol
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 9:45 am

Well nothing as beautiful as your poetry could be depressing.
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 9:51 am

Aww shucks miss

Lol I suck at taking compliments haha
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 12:09 pm

You should get better at it then XD Lol.
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 1:30 pm

You too Razz
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 2:09 pm

You see... That's where we differ. Your stuff is actually very very good so you should get better at receiving the proper praise. Me however, I'll take praise when it's ACTUALLY good XD
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 2:24 pm

Bleh bleh bleh you say this all the time. Maybe people here can knock some sense into you where I've clearly failed Razz
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Post by Guest on 29th June 2012, 2:33 pm

I don't need anything knocking into me thank you very much !!
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Post by Guest on 1st July 2012, 12:40 pm

Good point XD
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